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제목 No 390 19th December Wednesday 2018
작성일 2018-12-19 22:57 작성자 정순남 조회 4,304

It seems good that every diary has been correcting by  siwoon school.
 I read most diary  that  had been corrected by.

 

First,
It is a interesting things that I can see other's privacy.
Second.
 and I can improve my English ability and I can learn grammers by siwon school.
Third
  They  are looking into me through my diary and Siwon school cheering me up.

 

What a great Siwoon school!!

 

But
I'm sorry that I make a lot of my errors.
( I alway have excuse and I have lots of lapses too much.)
Siwon school might be annoying.
But I won't care about my errors
 because I am oldest student learning English.
If I can English fluency,
I  might don't need Siwoon school.

 

Thank you for Siwon school.

 

I have been catching a cold nowdays since I traveld 강원도.
I took a pill but didn't work and finally My husband  also catch a cold from yesterday.
I think because we used same bed.

 

I said him It's better we don't use same bed rather than use same bed.

 

But he answered loudly.
Don't worry.

 

But~ finally~

 

Today~noon~

 

A stupid man and I had a little  big fight.
That's because~
 I was sick but he didn't take care of me.
Even he didn't dishes and he didn't cook meal.
When I was sick,   I had never eaten a meal and
he had never set the table for me.

 

In a word,
he is an old man.
He is just a person who doesn't care and  an egoist.

 

I yelled at him~
You are not humanist and you are so  bad person.

 

I am worried myself truely.

 

 We live in the same generation person who have to shared our life each other.
More and more we will get old, we have to love deeply.
Finally
My two daughters will leave , they  will  live theirselves their life.

 

 

 

As everybody think~
Finally~
There is  only two of us.

 

To parents, children are just children
and they are  pleasure and happy for us.

 

We enough got  pleasure and were happy,
so we should  live well .

 

But~
I think  it seems a stupid man don't know it.

 

He is not wise.

 

A minute ago~
During  I am writing a diary, he comes  me and gives me small pill.
I didn't look at him.

 


 He said me.
If you take pill, you don't get slight cough.

 

What is this situsation?

 

Appologize?

 

Should I just  lose the fight again?

 

I had been lose everytime.

 

So he always make me stupid.

 

He is headstrong.

 

I am still getting cough.

 

My son-in-law is a day- off tomorrow  because I have been sick.
I am takeing care of my granddaguhter usual,
but I can't it tomorrow.
so my son-in-law have to take care of his baby .
I will enough relax thank to my son-in-law.

 

Like this
My son-in-law and my daughter give a gift from heart.

 


I tried to use relative pronoun as many as  I can.
But~~
I don't like them.
But I will pay attention to the idioms and relative pronoun so that I can write long sentenses.

                         That's all.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
시원스쿨   (2018-12-20) 
안녕하세요 정순남 회원님.
오늘도 소중한 일기를 작성해주셔서 감사합니다.

1. It is a interesting things that I can see other's privacy.
가주어 it에 사실 ~하는 것 이라는 표현이 들어가 있으므로 뒤에 things는 생략하셔도 됩니다.
It is interesting that I can see other's privacy.

2. I alway have excuse and I have lots of lapses too much.
excuse는 변명, 나쁜 사례 라는 뜻이므로 어울리지 않는 표현입니다.
lots of와 too much를 같이 쓸 필요는 없습니다.
둘 다 많은 이란 뜻인데 중복하여 쓸 이유가 없기 때문이죠.
영어일기를 쓸 때의 실수는 error 라는 단어를 사용하면 좋습니다.
I always have many errors in my English writing.

3. everybody, everyone은 3인칭 단수 동사이므로 따라오는 동사에 s를 붙여주세요.

4. enough는 명사 앞이나 뒤에 위치합니다.
-> We got enough pleasure, and we were happy,

다음 일기도 기대하겠습니다.

감사합니다.
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