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No 390 19th December Wednesday 2018
It seems good that every diary has been correcting by siwoon school.
I read most diary that had been corrected by.
It is a interesting things that I can see other's privacy.
and I can improve my English ability and I can learn grammers by siwon school.
They are looking into me through my diary and Siwon school cheering me up.
What a great Siwoon school!!
I'm sorry that I make a lot of my errors.
( I alway have excuse and I have lots of lapses too much.)
Siwon school might be annoying.
But I won't care about my errors
because I am oldest student learning English.
If I can English fluency,
I might don't need Siwoon school.
Thank you for Siwon school.
I have been catching a cold nowdays since I traveld 강원도.
I took a pill but didn't work and finally My husband also catch a cold from yesterday.
I think because we used same bed.
I said him It's better we don't use same bed rather than use same bed.
But he answered loudly.
A stupid man and I had a little big fight.
I was sick but he didn't take care of me.
Even he didn't dishes and he didn't cook meal.
When I was sick, I had never eaten a meal and
he had never set the table for me.
In a word,
he is an old man.
He is just a person who doesn't care and an egoist.
I yelled at him~
You are not humanist and you are so bad person.
I am worried myself truely.
We live in the same generation person who have to shared our life each other.
More and more we will get old, we have to love deeply.
My two daughters will leave , they will live theirselves their life.
As everybody think~
There is only two of us.
To parents, children are just children
and they are pleasure and happy for us.
We enough got pleasure and were happy,
so we should live well .
I think it seems a stupid man don't know it.
He is not wise.
A minute ago~
During I am writing a diary, he comes me and gives me small pill.
I didn't look at him.
He said me.
If you take pill, you don't get slight cough.
What is this situsation?
Should I just lose the fight again?
I had been lose everytime.
So he always make me stupid.
He is headstrong.
I am still getting cough.
My son-in-law is a day- off tomorrow because I have been sick.
I am takeing care of my granddaguhter usual,
but I can't it tomorrow.
so my son-in-law have to take care of his baby .
I will enough relax thank to my son-in-law.
My son-in-law and my daughter give a gift from heart.
I tried to use relative pronoun as many as I can.
I don't like them.
But I will pay attention to the idioms and relative pronoun so that I can write long sentenses.
1. It is a interesting things that I can see other's privacy.
가주어 it에 사실 ~하는 것 이라는 표현이 들어가 있으므로 뒤에 things는 생략하셔도 됩니다.
It is interesting that I can see other's privacy.
2. I alway have excuse and I have lots of lapses too much.
excuse는 변명, 나쁜 사례 라는 뜻이므로 어울리지 않는 표현입니다.
lots of와 too much를 같이 쓸 필요는 없습니다.
둘 다 많은 이란 뜻인데 중복하여 쓸 이유가 없기 때문이죠.
영어일기를 쓸 때의 실수는 error 라는 단어를 사용하면 좋습니다.
I always have many errors in my English writing.