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No 375th 28th October Saturday 2018
It's 9:15 pm now.
I receivered call from my daughter about 2 pm today.
At that time I laid down on the sofa and I am watching TV and I had been studying English.
I was suprised and I replied in a hurry.
Fortunally, she was my daughter.
I am always afraid telephone that receive from the my granddaughter's daycare center.
I think it's mean that is not good things.
It's mean my granddaughter get sick or she has problem or she has fever.
My daughter told me that she has to submit thesis until today so she come back home late.
In addition, my son-in-law also has an appointment today.
I heard that they two come back home late.
During the wait,
I am washing the dishes and folding the laundry and
I disinfected milk bottles and I fed the dinner to my granddaughter.
And I and baby laid on the bed and we are watching video and she was drinking milk.
After she finished drank milk and I closed my eyes when she started crying a little.
Then she is moving and she started sleeping.
I sang a song during until she goes to sleep.
I put my granddaughter to sleep about 8:30 pm and I am writeing a diary.
I am not good these days because of couple's fight.
I am 60 years old,my husband is 64 years old.
We got married about 34 years ago.
34 years are not short time and long time
we don't listen to each other's thoughts.
I am full my selfish .
He is also full his selfish.
We are same stupid.
I don't know what would I do?
What should I do?
Anyway my head is filled with many thoughts.
Already My brain is also so tired.
We are going to walk tomorrow .
We just like walking.
we've decided to drink.
But It is not special things.
We often have like this time each other.
It's nine-fifteen now.
My daughter called me around 2 p.m. today.
At that time, I was lying on the sofa watching TV and studying English.
I was surprised and hurried back.
Luckily, she was my daughter.
I'm always afraid of the phone calls I get from my granddaughter's day care center.
I think that means it's not a good thing.
It means she's sick, has a problem, or has a fever.
My daughter said she will be home late because she has to submit her thesis by today.
Besides, my son-in-law has an appointment today.
I heard they're coming home late.
I washed the dishes, folded the laundry,
I disinfected the milk bottle and had dinner with my granddaughter.
And me and the baby lay in bed and we were watching a video and she was drinking milk.
After she finished drinking milk, I closed my eyes when she began to cry a little.
Then she moved and began to fall asleep.
I sang until she was asleep.
I put my granddaughter to bed at 8:30 p.m. and keep a diary.
I'm not feeling well because of a couple's quarrel these days.
I am 60 years old, and my husband is 64 years old.
We got married 34 years ago.
Thirty-four years is not a short time and a long time.
We don't listen to each other.
I am full of my ego.
He is also full of his egoism.
We are equally stupid.
I don't know what to do.
What should I do?
Anyway, my head is full of many thoughts.
My brain is already too tired.
We will take a walk tomorrow.
We just like to walk.
I've decided to drink.
But it is not something special.
We often like this time with each other.
1. At that time I laid down on the sofa and I am watching TV and I had been studying English.
- 이 문장은 시제를 일치시켜야 합니다.
-> At that time, I was lying on the sofa, watcing TV,and studying English.
2. And me and the baby lay in bed and we were watching a video and she was drinking milk.
- 문장 처음에 and 라는 접속사를 사용하는 것은 좋지 않습니다.
- me 와 the baby는 각각 주격과 소유격으로 나타내주시면 좋습니다.
-> My baby and I were lying in bed watching a movie.
3. We are going to walk tomorrow .
- 산책을 나가다 라는 표현은
go out for a walk 입니다.
-> We are going to go out for a walk tomorrow. 라고 하시면 좋겠습니다.